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The croaking frogs sing a lullaby at twilight, harmonizing the pop of sticks crumbling in the campfire. Lake Superior hums beneath it all, carrying the song in waves and dancing stones, in splashes and gentle crashes. prologue to moonlight summer's lasting solstice glow stay with me awhile
I wrote this poem for the Wea’ve Written Weekly prompt at the Skeptic’s Kaddish. This week’s prompt was brought to us by Jude who asked us to meet the following criteria:
- FORM: Haibun
- POETIC DEVICE: Onomatopoeia (3x)
- THEME: “The Beauty of Night”
The prompt reminded me of our camping trip to Lake Superior last summer, where I took the above photo. There is something special about nature’s music that seems to come to life right as the sun sinks below the horizon. We have another camping trip planned next week, though a bit closer to home. Fingers crossed that the rain finally stops as this summer’s deluge has already flooded the garden, disappointed my pepper plants, and cancelled the boys’ T-ball practice more than once. Thunderstorms would make our camping trip less than pleasant, though I have camped in them before. I’d rate it 4/5 stars for excitement and suspense– will our tent actually blow away?!– and 0/5 stars for staying dry and joyful, for a grand total 4/10-star camping experience. Whatever the weather holds, I’m looking forward to more memories and adventures this summer! ❤️
Ahh sorry the rain has been making trouble. I loveee the photo!!
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Thank you! It’s way more rain than average for us and it’s starting to lead to flooding issues. Fingers crossed that it stops for a bit! 🤞
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short and delicious. I like it. Love the photo too.
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Thank you, Selma! I really like the lighting that I managed to capture; sometimes my photos turn out okay. 😀
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Wonderful 👏🏽
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Fingers crossed the weather cooperates!
Dusk is always a magical time. (K)
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Thank you! It truly is. 🌆
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Sarah this is lovely! I can hear the fire and the sound of the water lapping at the shore!
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Thank you! Looking forward to more camping in a couple of days 🤞💗🥰
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Ah, there’s something really refreshing about this. A great haibun.
I also love that you’re ready to have fun come rain or shine✨🙏🏾🖤
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Thank you 🥰 we are ready for adventure!
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Perfect to prompt and the image. Thanks.
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Thank you!
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Congratulations, Sarah David. I choose you for poet of the week.🙏🏾✍🏾✨🖤
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Thank you, Jude! You’re too kind. I enjoyed your prompt last week!💗
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I love camping too! ⛺️ I enjoy the sound of rain from inside the tent. What joy listening to croaking frogs 🐸 Nice photo of your two camping chairs sitting in the quiet of the dusk . 💙
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Thank you! The rain inside the tent is lovely, especially if it’s just a drizzle right at nightfall or in the early morning. 💙
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Sarah ~ Mazal Tov!
You are our new PoW! I have emailed you with next steps at your wo…ee@gmail.com address.
If you haven’t received it, please contact me directly at:
DVDBGMLNY at GMAIL dot COM
Much love,
David
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Thank you, David! I got your response to my prompt idea and I’m looking forward to it. Honored to be the PoW 💖
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*hug*
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Sarah, I just wanna say that your haibun makes me yearn to go camping… I haven’t done so for years and years and years!
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It’s a wonderful experience! Hopefully you get a chance to go with your family sometime 😊
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🤗
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Sarah, I love your gorgeous haibun. How wonderful it must be to go camping.
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