
Borrow the wind and toss its worries furrow under marshmallow clouds tomorrow daylight moves a mountain stow thoughts under nighttime's shrouds Ride the wind through the cattails wayside thimbles lost to the blue guide the daydreamer we once knew night's rich tide enveloping you
I wrote this poem for the Wea’ve Written Weekly prompt from the Skeptic’s Kaddish. This week’s prompt was from Jennifer, who asks us to do the following:
“As days grow shorter in the northern hemisphere, I find myself going to bed a bit earlier and rising a bit later. More time for dreaming! This week’s prompt is to write a “lento” on the topic of dreams. This could be about dreams themselves, the act of dreaming, the dreamer or a dreamlike quality.”
Jennifer also suggested Langston Hughes “Dreams” for inspiration, which is one of my favorites, so I’ll link it here, too.

I love the references to nature in your lento. After riding the wind through cattails while comfortably furrowed under marshmallow clouds, I would definitely wake ready to move mountains. ❤️
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Thank you, and thanks for the wonderful prompt this week! This is my first lento, and I really enjoyed this form.
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Thank you – glad you liked it! 😊
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this
is so beautiful! ❤
~David
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Thank you, David! 🙂
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Lovely Sarah and what a beautiful line ‘wayside thimbles lost to the blue’ 💙
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Thank you!
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I agree. Langston Hughes poem is wonderful. ❤️
So is yours! I loved it. ❤️
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Thanks! Glad you liked it. 🙂
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This is simply beautiful!
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Thank you. 🙂
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Sarah this one is so very good! You really made this form sing!!
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Aw, thanks! This was a fun form to try!
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Like an old song…beautiful rhythm and images. (K)
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Thank you 🙂
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Hi Sarah – you are the next W3 Poet of the Week (PoW)! 👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼
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Thank you! Such a fun community 🙂
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Hi, Sarah! I’ve e-mailed you with next steps for this week’s W3.
If you haven’t receive my email, please contact me at:
DVDBGMLNY at GMAIL dot COM
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Thanks, David! I think my email went through okay 😀
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Yep! And I’ve sent you a follow-up email with an attachment
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Thanks! I think I accidentally picked a really challenging one, but the examples looked so cool online. 😀
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🤗
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I love “marshmallow clouds”☁️
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Thank you 🙂
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Great Lento! Nice to have it for the W3 this week! Thanks!
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Thank you! Glad you liked it!
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