
Hints of nutmeg and chocolate whisper across the room, warming up the morning gloom, wafting slowly, the
aromas bloom. The cup I poured
casts a satisfying warmth,
the delectable mocha I adore.
Eyes closed with expectation,
a mug wrapped in anticipation.
Then, my joy crushed by squealing surprise:
a critter slurps the treat before my eyes!
Note: image is AI-generated (probably obvious), though poem is 100% weird little me
I wrote this poem for Wea’ve Written Weekly, prompt #191. This week’s prompt was provided by Nolcha, who asks us to do the following:
Let’s send 2025 off with a giggle!
Write a poem of 10 lines or fewer that places someone—or something—in a delightfully improbable location. Think sharks in a bathtub, a dragon in a bar, or any unexpected presence where it clearly doesn’t belong.
Surprise us. Amuse us.
Happy writing!
Fortunately, I’ve never had a chipmunk in my coffee cup. Though, while camping, I have experienced a few unsavory bugs sneaking into my coffee. That’s definitely never a welcome surprise, if slightly comical. 😜 I wonder what other animals would think about the taste of coffee. Would chipmunks appreciate the heavenly goodness of a mocha latte? We may never know…

Thanks for the afternoon smile!
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You’re welcome 🙂
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Sarah, your poem reminds me of the time I found a mouse in my corn flakes! I poured from the box and the mouse tipped out. 🤭
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Oh, no! Those mice will find anywhere to sneak into.
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