
the storm of love's intent
once content with play and ruse
now bound by tragic melody
as strident calls echo in tune
two paired hearts so powerless
courting potion through to doom
the harmony of life's sunrise
now blurred by darkened clouds
but the weightless souls eternal
entwine beyond the sodden ground
I wrote this poem for this week’s We’ave Written Weekly at the Skeptic’s Kaddish. Leslie provided this week’s prompt, which is as follows:
Lesleyās prompt guidelines
- Write an ekphrastic poem inspired by the music of Liebestod, the final, dramatic music from Wagnerās 1859 opera āTristan und Isoldeā, which you can listen to above;
- This opera is based on the Celtic legend of Tristan and Isolde. It is optional to tell their story in your poem, but it is not required. Your poem may be abstract if you prefer.
Fun fact: I have a tattered copy of Tristan and Isolde that I collected from one of the “free book” shelves off the English department’s little corner of Wimberly Hall at the University of Wisconsin-La Crosse. Back in my days as a nerdy English major, one of my favorite past times was to get a coffee from Murphy’s Mug (the cozy coffee shop embedded in the campus library) and then scope out the free bookshelves before class.
Bonus fun fact: From those same shelves, I also scored a giant hardcover anthology of Shakespeare’s plays that looked old enough to be the Bard’s personal copy. I used to scare my high school students by dragging it out of my filing cabinet at my first teaching job and pretending that we were going to have to read the original translation rather than their modern copies. I also had a pretty epic poster of Shakespearean insults up in that classroom, but I’ve since lost it…which is, perhaps, another tragedy.

Lovely!
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Iād be scared too as a student if my teacher brought out that book š I enjoy watching the film adaptations of classics, but find them hard to readš
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š totally understandable! We watched some film versions and then some modern adaptations were fun, too! For instance, after reading “Romeo & Juliet”, we watched “Warm Bodies”, which is a modern comedy about zombies based loosely on that Shakespeare play. Then they got to make comparisons š
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Oooooooh… The juxtaposition of light and darkness, echoed in the contrast between life’s sunrise and darkened clouds, really adds depth to the emotional journey you depict here!
~David
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Thanks, David! š
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“the weightless souls eternal”–lovely image.
Shakespeare has many uses…(K)
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Thank you! There’s always a lot to discuss with Shakespeare š
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Sarah this is a delight! You packed a lot into this verse!!!
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Thank you! š
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Thank you for sharing this gorgeous poem, words ān āļø. š
I love this line! ācourting potion through to doomā.
Iād love a look through your old Shakespeare book. šā¤ļø
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Thanks, Lesley! It’s really fun. My husband and I both have a love of old books, so we still scope out unusual finds at thrift shops or used bookstores. Maybe I can share some images of the pages here…
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That would be lovely š„° š
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Wonderful one, thanks.
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Thank you!
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Hi, Sarah! šš»
Just wanna let you know that this week’s W3, hosted by our lovely Suzanne Brace, is now live:
https://skepticskaddish.com/2024/03/27/w3-prompt-100-weave-written-weekly/
Enjoy! š
Much love,
David
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Thanks! I will check it out this weekend š
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Sarah, what a lovely write!
How wonderful you have the copy of Tristan and Isolde and Shakespeare’s book too.
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Thank you! It’s really neat what books you can find in dusty corners of universities. š
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