
They call them "glacial potholes".
I wonder,
why not something more majestic?
not something I giggle over
--as if we need more potholes
in Wisconsin--
but true to their ancient legacy,
from when glaciers concealed
this place, and then, further back to when thick lava
oozed to form
these warbly basalt crags
that hid beneath the sand and ice that followed.
They lay in wait until
the swirling rapids sealed their fate:
mighty burrows
cut deep
into the rocky cliffs, a marvel towering
over the river,
far more magnificent than its namesake,
far less notorious than Midwestern road work.
I wrote this poem for this week’s Wea’ve Written Weekly prompt at the Skeptic’s Kaddish. Selma is our Poet of the Week, and she asks us to write about the following:
- Theme: The beauty and perpetuity of the natural world that surrounds you;
- Think about the simplicity of a blade of grass or a flower petal, of how every detail IS a life of its own;
- Form: Any form;
- Length: No longer than 400 words, but not too short;
- If you write haiku or any of the short syllabic forms, please make it a long series where we can feel your surroundings.

It’s a beautiful poem
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Thank you, Sadie 😊
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You’re welcome Sarah
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This post just made me decide to follow a nature blog – I love wonders of nature. And this was humorous about the potholes haha 😆
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Yay! 😅 I’m glad it made an impression.
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Beautiful it is…thanks.
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Thank you!
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Now I’ve learned something new–great photo, as well as words. (K)
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Thank you! It’s not an adventure for me unless I’ve learned something new. 😊
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this is wonderful, Sarah! I love how you used those line indentations to great effect!
Much love,
David
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Thank you, David! I was trying out something a bit different 😁
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hi, Sarah! 👋🏻
Just wanna let you know that this week’s W3, hosted by the wonderful Suzanne Brace, is now live:
https://skepticskaddish.com/2024/08/28/w3-prompt-122-weave-written-weekly/
Enjoy❣️
Much love,
David
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Thank you, David! I’m not sure I’ll make it in this week as time has gotten away from me, but I’ll be back on track next week. 😊
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sounds good ❤
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Hi, Sarah 👋🏻
Just wanna let you know that this week’s W3, hosted by our beloved Sally, is now live!
https://skepticskaddish.com/2024/09/04/w3-prompt-123-weave-written-weekly/
Enjoy❣️
~David
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Thank you, David!
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🤗
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You bring their majesty to life through your words.
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Thank you 🙂
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