
If "incompetent" were a person's face,
his would fit the dictionary's place:
A walking, talking complete disaster,
a lunatic, clown, and flailing disgrace.
Pulling the circus strings, this ringmaster:
the opposite of an intelligent forecaster,
whining like a toddler and making up lies,
his head is an empty soda canister.
Everyone blocks out his obnoxious cries,
except for the ones with planks in their eyes:
for they worship money and idiocy
over anything truly valued in the skies.
The world's flipped upside-down with no dignity:
we can thank imbeciles like him for this lunacy.
Though we'll hold hope for those with grace,
we need a change rather immediately.
I wrote this poem for the Wea’ve Written Weekly prompt #223, which asks us to do the following:
This week, your challenge is to write a funny roast or a strong complaint about a government leader or another person who has power.
Your poem should use a form called an interlocking rubaiyat.
Here is how the form works:
- Write between 4 and 8 stanzas.
- Each stanza has 4 lines.
- Each line should have 8 syllables.
- The rhymes link one stanza to the next.
The rhyme pattern looks like this: AABA / BBCB / CCDC / DDED

Sarah, wow! I really like how you make the whole poem feel like a circus, with the “ringmaster” image tying together all the noise, lies, and foolishness.
~David
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That’s how it feels over here 🎪
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🤗
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This line made me smile “his head is an empty soda canister.”
I wonder who you’re writing about 🤔 😂
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HAha, thanks!
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So good! And your last line nails it: “we need a change rather immediately”
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Thanks, Sally! 🤞
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Sarah this one is a joy to read!! I can feel the frustration in the last stanza… Bravo! We are indeed in at a circus!
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Thanks! We really are– it gets more bizarre by the day, unfortunately.
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Sarah, I choose you as the next Poet of the Week! I’m letting David know and I’m sure he’ll send you the guidelines!! Congratulations!
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Sarah, mazal tov!
I’ve sent you an email with ‘next steps’, but just in case you haven’t received it, please email me directly at:
DVDBGMLNY at GMAIL dot COM
Thanks!
~David
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I was away for a while and not able to accept the honor properly. Thank you for considering me.
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hi, Sarah❣️
Just wanna let you know that this week’s W3, hosted by me, is live until Monday:
Much love,
David
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