Poem: Freeing

out west

we follow buffalo

over rocky hill crests

open prairie echo

hammering in our chests

6 thoughts on “Poem: Freeing”

Jaya Avendel says:

April 3, 2022 at 2:36 pm

Ah, this imagery moves me! I love the alive feeling of it and the sweeping imagery.

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1. wordsandcoffee1 says:
  
  April 3, 2022 at 3:00 pm
  
  Thank you! 🙂
  
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murisopsis says:

April 3, 2022 at 6:26 pm

Brava! I am very happy that you tried this form – you made this poem sing!

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1. wordsandcoffee1 says:
  
  April 3, 2022 at 9:20 pm
  
  Thank you for the suggestion! I enjoyed trying out a new form. 🙂
  
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ben Alexander says:

April 3, 2022 at 8:57 pm

lovely 🙂

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1. wordsandcoffee1 says:
  
  April 3, 2022 at 9:21 pm
  
  Thank you, David!
  
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