
under the echoes of birdsong, the waves serenade the rocks meeting together, crashing gong, sky and water: earth's paradox the waves serenade the rocks from the cliffs of this lonely isle sky and water: earth's paradox will you stay here with me for a while? from the cliffs of this lonely isle, we surrender all humanity will you stay here with me for a while? nights are silent beyond the trees we surrender all humanity, accepting guardianship of the coasts nights are silent beyond the trees, moaning wind, and shipwrecked ghosts
The Wea’ve Written Weekly prompt comes from Punam this week, who asks us to do the following:
—Write a Pantoum on the theme of abandonment.
I think I’ve written one other pantoum on this blog before, but I couldn’t find it, so here’s instead the link to another poem I wrote about Lake Superior. Maybe this is no longer the case today, but I think a hundred years ago, being out in a remote place as the (perhaps sole) guardian of a light that brings ships safely to shore sounds both slightly mystical and incredibly lonely.
My husband and I visited this particular lighthouse (the Split Rock Lighthouse in Two Harbors, Minnesota) in October 2021. It’s a breathtaking sheer cliff drop of 130 feet from the lighthouse to the frigid and crystal clear waters below. The North Shore of Lake Superior was once known as the most dangerous piece of water in the world, home to more than 300 shipwrecks. Many lighthouses also freckle the coasts of Lake Superior, established in attempts to prevent adding to that total. Some of them are still in use today.
My mom’s a huge fan of lighthouses, and, living near the Great Lakes most of my life, we’ve had opportunities to explore quite a few of them and learn their interesting histories. I’ve even written a poem while sitting on a rock in the shadow of another Lake Superior lighthouse, that one in Marquette, Michigan.
This is fabulous 💙
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Aw, thanks, Paula!
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Beautifully written
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Thank you, Sadje!
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You’re welcome Sarah
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I’ve always wanted to visit a lighthouse. Very fascinating history with this one!
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Thanks! They are fascinating places. They usually have neat spiral staircases, too! I’m afraid of heights, but I’ll usually force myself up to a lighthouse tower if I have the opportunity.
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Your story about lighthouses is fascinating. So cool, your mom and you all. I like lighthouses too.
And the pantoum— yay! It’s a complex form. I think you did it well. Xoxo
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Thanks, Selma! I’m always a little nervous when a rhyme scheme is involved, hehe. Have you been to many lighthouses?
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Great writing 👌
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Thank you 🙂
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“Surrendering all humanity”–that is what we feel when we really experience the natural world. You’ve caught that awareness here. (K)
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Thanks!
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Sarah ~ that last lines is music. I felt it. Excellent.
~David
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Thank you, David! ☺️
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Sarah, just wanna let you know that this week’s W3, which is hosted by our brilliant Kerfe, is now live!
Enjoy ❤
Sincerely,
David
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Thanks!
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🤗
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I’ve enjoyed reading some lighthouse keepers diaries, and find them interesting (as I am also from the Great Lakes area – but in IL).
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Nice! I’ve read excerpts from a lighthouse keeper’s journal at one of the lighthouses we toured. The history is so fascinating!
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I love this look back at the solitude of what was the lighthouse keeper’s life. The pantoum seems the perfect vehicle!!
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Thanks! I enjoyed the pantoum form!
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An excellent pantoum. Seamless. This is so well thought out, and deep.
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Thank you!
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It has a fascinating story and you just wrote this pantoum flawlessly.
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Thank you! ☺️
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Sarah, this is a beautiful Pantoum! As a sailor’s wife, my fascination with lighthouses is understandable, I guess. He has wonderful memories of sailing in Great Lakes. 😊
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The Great Lakes are a beautiful place! I’m glad he has wonderful memories of them ☺️
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😊
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moaning wind, and shipwrecked ghosts. What a wonderful last line ❤️ to a beautiful poem 🌹
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Thanks, Lesley! I realized later that I was supposed to have the first line repeat to complete the pantoum. Oops. I like how it turned out, though 😀
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