
this city that knit our hearts together
rippling under a setting sun
of Kool-Aid colored yarns and heathers
the rivers weaving together to one
under sunlight's gaze we'll stay a while
catching memories in butterfly nets
basking in nature's soothing smile
any worries this place will surely forget
we'll sing the scores of the bluff and rivers, the hidden alleys and burnished brick,
cozy scarves over winter's shivers
as winds race through the valley, brisk
prisms play in the sprinkling fountains
lunge skyward and then throw arms back
we'll spend the days climbing mountains
our feet still know those well-worn tracks
I wrote this ode for the Wea’ve Written Weekly prompt #140 over at the Skeptic’s Kaddish. This week’s prompt was provided by Heather, who asks us to do the following:
Write an ode in praise of a person, place or thing.
This is an ode to one of my all-time favorite places, the city where I earned my bachelor’s degree, spent 5 years of my life, met my husband, and still visit for friends and family fairly often: La Crosse, Wisconsin.
Where are some of your favorite places?

Wonderful connections.
I like the ocean beach. And NYC. (K)
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Thank you! The ocean is one of my favorites, too. ❤️
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What a beautiful poem, Sarah! Isn’t it wondrous how a certain place can embed itself into our hearts?
Yvette M Calleiro 🙂
http://yvettemcalleiro.blogspot.com
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Thank you, Yvette! It’s a special kind of magic. ❤️
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This just made me realize I don’t really have a favorite place, yikes. Good thing by God’s grace, there’s still time left to explore and find one 😂
Loved reading!!
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Thank you! Yes, there is certainly time to find a favorite place. You can also have multiple favorites if you like 😁😉
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This is so beautiful Sarah
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Thank you, Sadje!
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It seems there is so much to be thankful for. You make me want to visit! Some of your lines capture the qualities of a favourite place of mine… “knit our hearts together, under sunlight’s gaze we’ll stay awhile” just to mention a few.
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There truly is. I’m glad that the words connected to your own special place!
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Such a wonderful ode, and beautiful imagery✨🌼.
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Thank you, Jude!
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Sarah, I love how you weave nature and connection together so beautifully!
Much love,
David
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Thank you, David!
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hi, Sarah❣️
Just wanna let you know that this week’s W3, hosted by our beloved Suzanne, is now live:
Enjoy 😃
Much love,
David
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Sounds good. Thanks, David!
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This is so beautifully woven with strands of nature running through it. Love it, Sarah. ❤️
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Thank you!
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My pleasure.
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