
Bubbles floating freely up to the sky,
memories spiraling gently under the sky.
Chilly morning calm breaks into sun's delight,
as cumulus, cotton-ball clouds play in the sky.
Warmth hovers in the atmosphere, its glowing love,
as cerulean calm paints its melody on the sky.
Daylight in dance, a playful canvas for loved ones:
a home for buzzing bees and chirping birds in the sky.
Crepuscular rays catch dust that sparkles brightly,
as the evening's beams hover still amongst the sky.
The night's first stars cast life upon a dark slate,
I watch the artist's palette of pinks and reds leave the sky.
I wrote this poem for the Wea’ve Written Weekly prompt #147 at the Skeptic’s Kaddish. Artie was the Poet of the Week and provided us with the following prompt:
- FORM: Ghazal
- THEME: Love (romantic, spiritual, agape, platonic, etc.)
Ghazal
- Made up of a chain of couplets, where each couplet is an independent poem;
- It should be natural to put a comma at the end of the first line of each couplet;
- The Ghazal has a refrain of one to three words that repeat, and an inline rhyme that precedes the refrain;
- Lines 1 and 2, then every second line, have this refrain and inline rhyme;
- The last couplet should refer to the author’s name;
- The rhyming scheme is AA bA cA dA eA etc.

Beautiful ascension and descent in this poem. I really enjoyed the way you did this.
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Thank you!
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That opening couplet is so heartwarming, Sarah! I love how you painted the sky in all its glory with beautifully captured moments. ❤️
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Thank you! The sky always seems ready to tell a story.
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Perfection. The opening couplet sounds perfect as does the rest.
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Thank you!
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Bubbles are one of life’s delights, especially when shared with a child. (K)
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Very true. We have a local “bubble artist” who attends family-friendly events in town in the summer, putting on shows with unique, giant bubble wands. The kids love it!
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I love the images you created to show the passage of time. I especially loved the closing couplet.
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Thank you! I had a lot of fun with this one.
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Sarah I love this view of the sky! And the photo of the boys all looking up at the sky – perfect!!
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Thank you!
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Sarah, your poem beautifully captures the changing moods of the sky. I love how each stanza invites us to pause and appreciate nature’s subtle transformations.
Much love,
David
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Thank you, David!
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What a wonderful ghazal. I love your love for the sky—and the photograph that illustrates your lovely poem. 💙
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Thank you, Lesley!
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hi, Sarah 🙂
Just wanna let you know that this week’s W3 prompt, hosted for the first time by the wonderful Violet Lentz, is now live:
Enjoy❣️
Much love,
David
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hi, Sarah 😁
Just wanna let you know that this week’s W3, hosted by our beloved Murisopsis, is now live:
Enjoy❣️
Much love,
David
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Thanks, David! I missed a couple of these, but I’ll get back into it this week.
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we’re always here for your poem-prompting needs! 😀
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It’s a wonderful community. 🙂
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