elastic orange sun
tugged over fading frame
reflection on glass pane
gray memories
I gave #TankaTuesday on the Word Craft Poetry blog another try for this week’s #TasteTheRainbow challenge. Today was my first attempt at writing an Abhanga, which is a very beautiful form that I will likely try again! I also tried to incorporate a separate NaPoWriMo Challenge for fun.
Words and Coffee Writing 
Beautiful.
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Thank you!
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I love the idea of an elastic sun! Very original use and the photo fits perfectly!
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Aw, thanks! We’ve been fortune to witness some really beautiful sunsets lately, and this one looked elastic to me. 😀
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Gorgeous the contrast of colors in this piece!
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Thank you!
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Oh, so evocative! Love this! 💕🙂
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Thank you!
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I love the elastic orange sun! What a great Aghanga. ❤
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Thank you! It’s a lovely form. I’ve been learning so much about poetry this year from others on WordPress 🙂
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That’s wonderful. It’s a great place to learn. Besides, writing poetry is good for us. ❤
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Your poem is a beautiful collection of color, Sarah! I love the contrast of the orange and gray. 🙂
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Thanks! I enjoy writing about contrasts.
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Sarah, this line & the one before it are just lovely! I love ’em!
❤
David
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Thank you, David! I’ve been enjoying these Tuesday challenges!
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Me too ❣️
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