
above the cloud line
capturing wonders through frame
earth’s beauty remains
within our perceptive gaze
and beyond all that we are
This poem is for the Colleen’s weekly #TankaTuesday Challenge, brought to us this week from David at Skeptic’s Kaddish. Here was today’s prompt: “This is a photo of David’s father. Please be aware that he is no longer with us. David dedicated his blog to his father’s memory. You can read more about his journey HERE. With that being said, take a deep look at this photo. Don’t describe what we all can see. Look into the camera lens… what do YOU see? What is revealed to you? Now, write your syllabic poem.”
Sarah, this is wonderful 💕🙂
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Thanks, Harmony! 🙂
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I love your poem, Sarah. It makes me reflect on how nature’s beauty is so easy to find the higher we escape from man’s invasion of her. Great poem! 🙂
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Thank you! I believe that is true 🙂
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Love this. Earth’s beauty beyond all that we are.
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Thank you!
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Sarah, I love how you connected the beauty of nature to be awe inspiring. I like to think that David’s father felt that as well, as he photographed the scenery. You did a great job with this poem. ❤
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Thank you!
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You’re welcome. ❤
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So beautiful 💜
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Thank you!
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💜💜
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