
spring dances again
comfort in renewal
buds billowing
bees hovering
birds trilling
sky shimmering
nature is reborn
solace blooms
~gratitude~
blooms solace
reborn is nature
shimmering sky
trilling birds
hovering bees
billowing buds
renewal in comfort
again, dances spring
I wrote this poem for the Wea’ve Written Weekly poetry prompt. This week’s challenge comes from Punam who asks us to do the following:
- Compose a palindrome poem on any theme;
- Feeling ambitious? Compose your poem on the theme of ‘gratitude’.
The palindrome poem looked incredibly challenging to me when I first saw it! Still, I decided to give it a shot. How badly could I mess it up, truly? 😅 (Full disclosure: it took a few tries to create this poem.)
I thought the “gratitude” theme fit well with the photo (above) that I took last week of the new buds on our crab apple tree. I also snapped a few photos of our lovely plum tree at the right, too. Spring’s new growth is something I am always thankful for. Does anyone else creep around in their yard taking photos of the new blossoms or is it just me? 😬


I found the form tricky too lol 😬
yours is lovely… flows beautifully 🤍🙏
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Thank you! I enjoyed seeing how others put their palindromes together this week.
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oh well done. Yes I creep about too, maybe even more creepy I take photos of others peoples (front garden) plants when I see something I want to capture … 😂
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Haha! so do I!
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😂
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Thank you! Hah, that’s great! It’s just admiration and not creepiness, right? 😅😉
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Mirthfulness all around with spring….Perfect take to the prompt. Thanks for the nice share. 🙏🙏
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Thank you! 😊
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I creep around in other people’s yards. 😁
Your palindrome is gorgeous.
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Thank you! Hah, as long as they don’t mind, I’m sure it’s okay 😅
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This is like springtime in a nutshell, Sarah – forwards and backwards – just perfect❣️
~David
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Thanks, David! 😊
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Such bright gratitude for spring! Your palindrome poem flows quite smoothly.
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Thank you!
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I like the frame your first and last lines make. (K)
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Thanks! I started in the very middle and then wrote the first/last lines and worked my way in; I’m not sure how others managed this form, but that seemed to work best for me 😁
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That’s a great idea. I’ll remember that for the future.
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It worked okay for me; I hope it’s a helpful strategy. 😀
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Sarah this one is fantastic! It is concise and that makes the rhythm work beautifully! 🤗🤗
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Thank you! It took a few attempts, but I’m glad I got it to flow. 😊
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Sarah, what lovely photos! If I had such lovely buds blossoming in my yard, I guess, I would be creeping too click them.
What a lovely spring palindrome and definitely something to be grateful for and I love the opening/closing line.
Thanks for joining in. ❤️
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Thank you! It was a fun challenge!
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So glad you enjoyed the challenge. You are welcome.
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Sarah 👋🏻
Just wanna let you know that this week’s W3, hosted by our beloved Sadje, is now live:
https://skepticskaddish.com/2024/05/15/w3-prompt-107-weave-written-weekly/
Much love,
David
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Thanks, David!
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hi, Sarah 👋🏻
just wanna let you know that this week’s W3, hosted by our beloved Suzanne, is now live:
https://skepticskaddish.com/2024/05/22/w3-prompt-108-weave-written-weekly/
enjoy 😁
much love,
David
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Thank you, David!
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What a beautiful spring poem, that emphasizes all that is wonderful about spring. I creep around taking photos, too, of blossoming trees and flowers. It is a practice that’s been going on since March 2020, walking around the neighborhood enjoying the change in the seasons. ~Nan
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Thank you! There’s something special about capturing nature in all its beautiful seasons. ❤️🌱
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There was a photographer in the Cleveland, Ohio area who took the same photo every day for a year. If I recall correctly, it was of Lake Erie, and the photographer had all of them put together, row after row of them, for a photo montage. I always thought that it was a cool idea that something was the same and yet different, depending..on the season, weather, etc. ~Nan
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That is a neat idea! I bet that would be a lovely series to create and to see in photographs.
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It was (and is). I have considered it, but I can’t sustain it.
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