Burst into ivory finery
like fragments of cloud
for merely two weeks
before summer peaks
and petals flutter forward
coiling into dandelion fluff
tasting fresh-mown lawn
and breathing earth’s heartbeat.
Today, I’m joining in David’s weekly W3 prompt on The Skeptic’s Kaddish. Today’s prompt was suggested by A. J. Wilson, who provided these guidelines:
- 12 lines or less;
- must include the word ‘fragment’ or a derivative of that word.
Our apple tree seemed a good inspiration as it began its short-lived annual burst into glorious blooms this week. We have one tall apple tree that has been on our property longer than we have, and we’ve recently planted another. We also bought two peach trees to plant this weekend, so we’ll see how those grow in the future. My husband and I would love a mango tree, but we’re a little bit (okay, a lotta bit) too far north! We’re in USDA hardiness Zone 4 for planting, and mangos can’t grow north of Zone 9 tragically. I’m honestly not even sure if the peaches will make it, but we’re giving it a try. At times like these, my husband shares his dreams of all we can eat fresh mangos and year-round sustainable farming if we move to Hawai’i or the Philippines (where he grew up), and it does sound intriguing. For now, though, we’ll enjoy the apple trees!
Never looked at the tree blossoms like fragments of cloud. I’ve been missing out on a beautiful image! Love it. 💜
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Thank you! It was a fun way to incorporate the prompt and describe these fluffy new blooms. 🙂
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Beautiful imagery thank you for sharing
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Thank you!
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Wonderful imagery! Love this, Sarah 💕🙂
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Thank you!
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Such wonderful images – love the idea of falling petals which ‘taste’ the grass.
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Thank you! I like playing with synesthetic imagery 🙂
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Hi, Sarah! ❤
I just want to let you know that the 4th W3 prompt, hosted by Kerfe Roig, is now live:
Much love,
David
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Thank you, David! I’m looking forward to it!
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